My reaction for the paragraph on communication
I will say that not being able to communicate well is very big problem. On a day to day basis, millions of dollars are being transacted through networking and businesses and the only way that you will make more clients or business is if you are able to present yourself with clear communication. Misleading information can be presented if the presenter is not communicating well to the audience. Also, we should always think and plan what to say before saying it as it will help us to build our thoughts and not smoke whatever we want.
There are not sentence fragments. However, for the sentence "though networking and businesses and the only way that you will make more clients...", the part "though networking and businesses" should be separated from "and the only way".
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